Subject: Read it!
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Posted on: 2009-05-22 14:22:00 UTC
I must say, this is a good first try! Glad you recruited the sniper. And giving the Eredar!Sue to Kil'Jaeden, that was one of the best things you can do.
-Love, Wik.
So I've decided to just bite the bullet and open "Scouring a Blue Soap" to public view.
Constructive criticism is, of course, welcome.
I must say, this is a good first try! Glad you recruited the sniper. And giving the Eredar!Sue to Kil'Jaeden, that was one of the best things you can do.
-Love, Wik.
Dunno anything about the given canon, though the mission still seems to be pretty good. Nice work. Out of curiosity, just how tall is this Prophet Velen supposed to be exactly? Also, I seem to be unable to find the continuum's mini-type in the mission for some reason or other, probably general inattentiveness...
Is that FFN profile you posted in the guestbook of the Link's Queen shrine really LQ? I ended up there through the Blue Soap archive website for some reason.
1) The average draenei seems to be somewhere between 7' and 7'6" (males are not much taller than females, although they're much bulkier). Prophet Velen is described as towering at least a half head over the tallest of his guards. In game...well, here you go.
2) They got into the story and out before the Wrath Cadets actually spawned. If the consequences of such actions are unknown, I'd be glad to write 'em.
3) I believe it was LQ at one point. Not sure what it is now.
