Subject: I'm very impressed.
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Posted on: 2009-05-09 08:04:00 UTC
How the heck did you manage to /read/ that FMA one? Hope it didn't give you too much of a headache!
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DOUBLE MISSION PLUG! by
on 2009-05-09 05:33:00 UTC
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Missions three and four are up. These are shorter than thew others, which is why I could do two in one day. Enjoy!
Mission #3 - my fanmade version of fma (http://agent-chliever.livejournal.com/2233.html#cutid1). Is this the absolute worst formatting ever seen? Maybe! And, due to their lack of a DoGA CAD, our intrepid Agents become victims of it themselves. Also Winston's first exorcism, and the debut of Chliever's brothers-in-law, who will appear from here on. Sorry if I stepped on anybody's toes with all the cameos in the cafeteria scene, by the way.
Mission #4 - Poor Eponine (http://agent-chliever.livejournal.com/2327.html#cutid1). NSFB. Les Miserables torture porn? Say it ain't so, Jim! Alas, it is, and it falls to our Agents to sort it out and get everyone's favorite street wench away from hardened criminals such as Harold Grumbled. Ever see a god of pestilence get sick on the job? It's not pretty. Also Winston's first direct kill. -
I'm very impressed. by
on 2009-05-09 08:04:00 UTC
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How the heck did you manage to /read/ that FMA one? Hope it didn't give you too much of a headache!
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Man, you work fast. by
on 2009-05-09 07:44:00 UTC
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I salute you, fellow fast-worker.
Also, you win the prize for worst formatting, no question. You may have the trophy from Fritz and Silas, who won it for their first mission. -
The formatting's not THAT bad. Unless you meant the fic. by
on 2009-05-09 21:43:00 UTC
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I'll be able to read these in more detail when my connection at home is back up, but I thought I should say I like it so far. Chliever's a rather interesting Agent, nice to see how you've made the idea of a daemon of Chaos working for the PPC go smoothly, though I'm not so sure if the Hive Tyrant agent you've made is as compatible, heh. Though maybe I shouldn't talk, since I made an Ork for an Agent. Still, good show so far, I'm working on my third mission myself. I'll definitely read these when things are up and working again.
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Re: The formatting's not THAT bad. Unless you meant the fic. by
on 2009-05-10 04:35:00 UTC
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Kh'orr'ak't'ann was actually a character created by myself and a friend when we were younger. He was sort of a comedic character, who could only manage to assimilate worlds for the Tyranids by accident. We've long since outgrown him, but I liked him a lot so I signed him up with the PPC. We never put him to paper, or even considered doing so, so he sort of exists somewhere between a semi-fic blip and entirely imaginary (see: Louise). I also wanted to use Schlect (who was recruited on Jay's last mission and hasn't been seen since), so I threw in someone big and scary-looking for him to utterly dominate.
As to how he functions, Mission 3 gives a clue. Note that he takes "Hive Maspirin." -
Yep, I saw. by
on 2009-05-11 20:12:00 UTC
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Kind of like how Zodfang (my Ork) needs a specific kind of Anti-Lustin to keep him from getting spores everywhere and spawning an Ork army in HQ. It's interesting, I just had concerns about a Tyranid being in HQ, similarly to how I'd have reservations about how well a Chaos Space Marine would fit.
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Regarding Schlect... by
on 2009-05-10 15:15:00 UTC
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It was actually a little fuzzy blob created by a misspelling of "bag" to "bad". Just from the description it got in Jay's mission, I'd say it ranked less as an Agent recruit and more as a kind of sentient pet, like the minis.
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Chliever by
on 2009-05-10 16:09:00 UTC
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Which is precisely why I made him an Agent. Just the thought of something like that being an Agent, let alone one that senior, amuses me.
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Re: Chliever by
on 2009-05-10 16:10:00 UTC
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ARGH! Name in the subject line!
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I did mean the fic. (nm) by
on 2009-05-09 22:15:00 UTC
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