Subject: I have you permission
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Posted on: 2009-04-20 08:31:00 UTC
One thing though, please work on your formating. If you can:t indent then please leave a space between paragraphs. I hate trying to read something that looks like it was just thrown together.
Gambate! (Good Luck!)
Leto
Well, after originally joining in October, going on a winter hiatus due to circumstances outside of my control, and finding my way back again in March, I've decided to post my first attempt at permission.
Agents and Writing Sample are here:
http://ulalume-42.livejournal.com/5104.html#cutid1
*sits and waits nervously*
Supposedly, you've been trying to show us how good your writing skills are. That being the case, it seems to me that lolspeak, although entertaining, is not really good form for a Permission request. I don't speak for the other PGs, but if it's a choice between a lolspeak Permission request and a new mission or something, I'm going to choose the new mission or something.
Just a word to the wise. {= )
~Neshomeh
But generally the Flowers' speech is marked by being in italics, not with regular quotation marks.
It just bugged me.
You Agent would not be the last Time Lady in the PPC; as far as I know, The Disentangler's still around.
I wasn't sure, hence why I had her say "...that she was of aware of."
Will probably go back and correct it later.
One thing though, please work on your formating. If you can:t indent then please leave a space between paragraphs. I hate trying to read something that looks like it was just thrown together.
Gambate! (Good Luck!)
Leto