Subject: Ack!
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Posted on: 2009-04-05 15:43:00 UTC
H-O-R-R-I-B-L-E. Good job, Adder and Deuce. One criticism, though: the scene where the Stu gets killed is not graphic enough. I'm not sadistic or violent by nature, but I think he deserved a more detailed death.
I can understand why people write smutfic. But why, of all fictional universes, would anyone choose HTF?
http://rc6664.webs.com/mission2.htm
Warning: NSFW. A script format lemon that is EXTREMELY painful.
This takes place right before the EPC attack on April 1st. I'm not sure if the attack is PPC canon, but I'm acknowledging it anyway in my missions. Because Adder gets a lightsaber in it and I have to explain how she got it somehow.
H-O-R-R-I-B-L-E. Good job, Adder and Deuce. One criticism, though: the scene where the Stu gets killed is not graphic enough. I'm not sadistic or violent by nature, but I think he deserved a more detailed death.
I can understand why people write smutfic. But why, of all fictional universes, would anyone choose HTF?
See, that was only two chapters out of four that Adder and Deuce killed... They've forgotten that things come back in the HTF-verse.
The PPC is about humour, not violence, after all.
hS