Subject: Edit - about lion skin
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Posted on: 2009-04-04 01:02:00 UTC
Yes, of course lions have skin, but the bit I was referring to was talking about should have said fur, not skin, as it was referring to a... colour, I think. Which, yes, would be influened by their actual skin, but the point is that they should've... ack. It's bad anyway.
The Lion King & The Little Mermaid Crossover
Script format, and somehow the Atlantic Ocean is in the middle of Africa. Yes, that's right; and there are crocodiles in it. Rotten prose, OOCness, stupidity (cub-Kiara speaks multiple languages, Melody forgets that she was NOT born with a tail, lions have SKIN...)
Also, Ariel is married to Eric, and they have their canonical daughter, but has become a mermaid again and warns Melody about "somme ruthless human"s. Go figure.
Not the worst thing I've ever seen, but worth PPCing nonetheless.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4895774/1/HowItShould_Be
A Ginny/Draco piece. Summary: It couldn’t be her of all people to do this to him! It didn’t make sense. It wasn’t right. She was a Weasley and he a Malfoy. It was unheard of to think of one and the other to be anything but enemies.
I think that says it all. It's very short, and I'm not entirely sure how to handle it, so I'll offer it up for grabs.
Yes, of course lions have skin, but the bit I was referring to was talking about should have said fur, not skin, as it was referring to a... colour, I think. Which, yes, would be influened by their actual skin, but the point is that they should've... ack. It's bad anyway.