Subject: I believe so
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Posted on: 2009-02-16 09:38:00 UTC
The first one isn't quite so bad as the others, but they certainly seem bad enough to PPC. Although you might have trouble with that third one iven it's so short.
Are these bad enough to PPC? I'm not entirely sure, but I for one don't like them.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4844157/1/DoctorWhoJustalike
<a href="http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4796291/1/mileysstory">http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4796291/1/mileys_story
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4864846/1/Thief
Not sure if any of these have been PPC'd
Frey
Found alone in a storm. Fourteen year old Frey seems to know alot about aliens. The torchwood team allow her to join them but what other secrets is she hiding?
She's the Master's daughter in Cardiff.
Torchwood Mystic Storm
This is my first fan fic story. All characters you recognize from Torchwood are Russel T. Davis any others are my own made-up characters.
Jack/OC and OC/OC. Hotaru, computer whizkid, been working for Tochwood for two years since graduating from college. Is sleeping with Jack and Kelly Rose. Kelly Rose, her roommate, cook and friend with benefits. Poor punctuation and grammar.
Trapped
What would happen if the world was sudden infected by an alien disease that killed everyone? And then by some ill fated accident, members of the torchwood team fell through a crack in time to this world? Would they survive? Eventual TorchwoodXDoctorWho
Earth Shock The Electric Feel
A new member of the Torchwood team suddenly shows up. an old friend of Jack's with something, or someone in common. Aurora has an interesting past, and present. rated M for bad langugae and sexual content. Please rate and review. ENJOY!
If no one else has claimed it, already. The writer apparently has never seen a comma in her life.
Hmm… I'll take the first one.
"Don't call me Doc." -- The Doctor, The Time Meddler.
I just skimmed the fics. First one has a run on sentence problem, but didn't seem too horrid. Basic "Doctor Who is not a TV show it's real" premise. Would be interesting to investigate whether what that means for PPC agents that step into such a fic.
Second one: I stopped reading when Jackie yelled at Rose something about wanting to get married after a year, but having a 13 year old daughter to think of. Uh, is this Rose who wants to get married to human!Doctor? Then how did 21 year old Rose get a 13 year old daughter?
No wait, don't answer that. Just kill it.
Third one: too short. Just leave it a critical review. That will kill it.
Do you want to take any of these on yourself? I've noticed your rather prolific. If not, I may want to take my chances for brain damage on the second fic.
I intend to do the second and its sequel, as well as http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4671938/1/Doctorwhowhenlaurenmetthedoctor .
It has a "Timelord 993", which a reviewer sounds like a weapon. Hmm...could this be the legendary "anti-regeneration" gun?
You didn't say you were intending on taking on any of them as missions.
By the way, taking on one story and its sequel is one thing. You could stick them together and kill the Sue in one mission. Taking on a third story is like you are targetting this author. Of course, this may not be your intention and she need never know about this, but it still might look that way to outsiders.
Anyway, I've read the miley story, seen quite a few charges in it, so I'll be interested in seeing what you make of it.
I should have made that clearer...
And I'll stick with " when lauren met the doctor" and "Thief" (which is by a different author). Don't want to look like I'm persecuting her after all...
By the way, what in Xendor's name are "chibis"?
But I think the term "chibis" comes from anime or manga. It are "cute" characters: short, round, big eyes.
Use google picture search for some examples.
That's the impression I got. Which is why after the season three finale aired I kept badgering my mate for a "Doctor Chibi" for Christmas (cage and little suit included).
So I can use chibi versions of canons/OCs as mini-Metroid food?
Well, rumour has it that there is Sue in the meat that is served at the cafeteria.
Somehow I got the image that chibi versions of canons are like some for of minis. I know some fandoms have minis that are tiny persons. So I imagine them having a personallity too.
Eh, just don't feed any live ones to the mini-Metroids.
But Sue! chibis are fair game, I take it? Arron's getting hungry, and dying by mini-Metroid would be a rather embarrassing way to go...
The first one isn't quite so bad as the others, but they certainly seem bad enough to PPC. Although you might have trouble with that third one iven it's so short.