Subject: Hmm...
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Posted on: 2009-02-20 14:44:00 UTC
Wasn't much that needed editing, actually. Good work on this one. However, one thing struck me as odd - the dialog at the very end cuts off abruptly for some reason.
Hello, everyone, bet y'all thought ya'd never hear from me again (*waits for the chorus of "damn"s and "it's him again"s to stop*). I'm getting pretty darn sick of this first mission of mine, as I'm sure y'all are getting sick of waiting for it, which is fine 'cause none of y'all are gonna read it anyway! :P Seriously though, I'm pretty much wrapping it up, but neither of my usual betas are available! So if anybody would mind giving it a beta for me before I put it on, I'd much appreciate it. At the least I'd owe you a favour. :P So, yeah, any takers?
Honestly, you vanish for a month and people start thinking they can just wander off and find new betas willy-nilly. :P
I'll take a look at it, Mister Impatient.
Call me paranoid, but that's just my way of making sure. Besides, I didn't know if you'd be on a month after my mission was done, heh.
I might be able to beta. I'm a pretty good proofreader.
I have OA's email, but I'll need yours if you want me to send it, if that's okay.
I haven't received any new mail. I was just wondering, because quite a lot of emails haven't been able to reach me in the past.
Just adding the finishing touches to it, then I'm sharing the doc with you two. Sorry for the wait, kind of sick right now.
Not like we're the ones in any rush. :p Just share with us whenever. Right, Buta?
Wasn't much that needed editing, actually. Good work on this one. However, one thing struck me as odd - the dialog at the very end cuts off abruptly for some reason.
If no one else volunteers, I'm pretty sure I could help make it at least legible. :) I'm hardly up to Cassie's level, but I should be able to assist a little.
I thought "What if she gets back in time to read this? Eeek!"