Subject: Yay!
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Posted on: 2008-11-26 03:40:00 UTC
Good job. ^_^ I like Oscar. He's shaping up nicely. Dare I ask who his dads are?
I spotted--or rather didn't spot--a missing word, here in red: "'Ergo, Legolas should not be yearning for anyone.'"
Also, I just realized how horrible the term "debugger" is. {X D
~Neshomeh, observant... or not.
Well, we said we'd do it and we have. Please welcome to the fold Agent Oscar Henson, brand new Agent of the DBS's Division of Mpreg, featured here in his first mission, being trained by Trojie and Pads.
The fic they take on is a particularly nasty rapefic mpreg by the name of 'Ethuil'waew', supposedly meaning 'Spring storm'. Rated R, just in case.
http://agenttrojie.livejournal.com/53315.html
Yay, you finished it! I'm amazed you got through it; that was... erm... it was. We'll leave it at that.
Oscar looks like he'll shape up quite nicely, though I can't help but wonder who his other father is.
I shall look forward to his future missions. :)
After all, that travesty has a sequel. Of thirty odd, mercifully short, chapters. And I think there's a WIP after that too. Argh.
Good job. ^_^ I like Oscar. He's shaping up nicely. Dare I ask who his dads are?
I spotted--or rather didn't spot--a missing word, here in red: "'Ergo, Legolas should not be yearning for anyone.'"
Also, I just realized how horrible the term "debugger" is. {X D
~Neshomeh, observant... or not.
Have crowbarred a "be" into that sentence. Ta for pointing it out.
It's an odd one, is debugger. But, after careful consideration, I've come to the conclusion that it's an apt one, as we use the debugger to reverse the uncanonical effects of buggery.
One of his dads is the ever-terrifying Bowie. And the other is Hoggle. No, we have no idea what premise the fic used to get them together, and I don't think we want to know either.
Is he going to start emanating glitter and/or develop a fascination with shiny things, or would they have trained that out of him?
And no, I don't want to know. >.
~Neshomeh
After all, the Nursery must have ways and means of beating the Sue-potential out of Sue children in the Nursery, otherwise HQ would be crawling with Sues. It is very possible, however, that he may take to wearing lycra and performing song and dance numbers, complete with croth-waggling, at inappropriate moments. Hopefully not in front of Lux.