Subject: Nice job!
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Posted on: 2008-11-25 20:37:00 UTC
That was a fun and quirky read, especially with the naming of Hawthorne. I must say, I rather like Ryni, just because I love how she talks. Keep up the good work and I'll be sure to seek out more of it.
First Interlude- In which a recruit misunderstands and names are debated...
On the livejournal: http://dracorn-adagio.livejournal.com/12181.html
On the website: http://www.freewebs.com/dracornadagio/firstinterlude.htm
Very enjoyable read. Not-Maglor's cluelessness was well done. At least he had enough of a backbone to protest what was going on, if not actually resist. It's a start.
"We recruited him, we name him." I suspect there are many people in HQ who should be grateful their recruiters were better with names than Ryni and Tirsaer. *g*
~Neshomeh
When my Agents recruited Tyler, Cassie wanted to name him Grignr. She'd been reading the Eye of Argon and was in a pretty cranky mood. I think Tyler will never know just how lucky he was that Nat was in a good mood that day.
...Hawthorne's backbone will strengthen. Hopefully, anyway.
Tirsaer and Ryni: doing their best to make sure that every recruit gets off to a humiliating start.
Thank you!
That was a fun and quirky read, especially with the naming of Hawthorne. I must say, I rather like Ryni, just because I love how she talks. Keep up the good work and I'll be sure to seek out more of it.
Ryni's probably my favorite character to write because of how she talks. Writing like that is ridiculously fun.