This looks good so far. You guys make a good team. Also, I know just enough about Yu Yu Hakusho to be really annoyed by Kurama's characterization, so I'm glad to see this dealt with.

I have one nitpick, and that is that Bleepka is not alcoholic. It is explicitly "pseudo-alcoholic," because Bleep-products and alcohol tend to explode on contact. Mind you, some intrepid folks have actually managed alcoholic Bleep-products (e.g. the Pan-Galactic Gargle Bleeprin Blaster), but Bleepka is not one of them. The Wiki isn't very specific about these things, but if you check out the Substance Menu, you'll get more details.

~Neshomeh

I'm so happy we got this much done. Boogey and I collaborated on this part but the majority of the writing is his. The next part will be mostly my doing and will be up NOT a year from now, but much sooner. Boogey will come up with deadlines for me and will punish me if I don't meet them. And not in the sexy hunkydory punishment way because that's not the way Boogeyman and I do things.

We love you all like crazy, and we ought to post on the boards more often instead of lurking like we do and we know that. And therefore, we welcome concrit in all its forms.

Much love and hugs,
Mystia