It's not terribly bad so far-the author has a passable understanding of the English language, for one thing- but there are a couple "Huh?" moments, and well...the summary speaks for itself. I'm not saying someone needs to kill it yet, but it should definitely be watched. Any fic in which the author "isn't sure" if it's Twilight or Blue Bloods should be regarded with suspicion at best, burned into ashes at worst. Anyone familiar with both canons will understand why.

Just Fate » by Naomii Cullen reviews
This story is about a girl and the story of her terrifying but romantic life. I did label it Blue Bloods but I think it is Twilight too. Please read and review!
Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 741 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-28-08 - Published: 9-28-08

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4564390/1/Just_Fate