Subject: I don't remember it...
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Posted on: 2013-08-04 17:32:00 UTC

But then, it'd be weird if I did, as I wasn't there for it :)

I did wonder if agents had ever done anything in memory of those lost in the big events, besides simply carving their names into the Tomb, so this was cool to see. A very enjoyable read, and the seperate sections you've put it into make it much easier to follow the different storylines than the original RP.

Thanks for sharing this.

You also said that you'd done a little light editing on the posts to correct minor SPaG issues etc., and I spotted a couple of bits that I think slipped through that:
- Part 2 has the line 'he whipped off his foggy glasses and cleaned them carefully on his shirt, taking the time to wipe eyes eyes' - that should probably read 'his eyes'.
- Part 5 has '"Known him practically since I joined up, and he's saved my life more times tan I can remember off the top of my head' - that should probably be 'than', although some agents are slurring their words by this point, the speaker here doesn't seem to have made any other mistakes.

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