Good God, can some government please pass a law that declares badfic as a treasonable offence? Okay, maybe not the first one, but as long as they are then forced to join a writing class, I'll be happy.

It's far better written than most (in terms of spelling and grammar, if not plot), but the author doesn't seem to understand what chapters are. Oh, and the Sue's once again called Amethyst. Make your own conclusions.

1000 Oceans by MsJasperHale: Empty Streets. I follow every breath into the night. The wind so cold. The sun is frozen the world has los tit's light. I carry your picture deep in me. Back to you over 1000 seas. Back to us. My name is Amethyst. And I'm in love with Sirius Black.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4567693/1/1000_Oceans

Oh, and on her profile she says this: "I normally write Harry Potter fan fiction, because I'm too afraid I'm going to defoul Twilight if I even attempt to write that fan fiction."

So Potter's okay to destroy but Twilight (huh?) is sacred? *sharpens knife*

"I want to be an author, a photographer and a model, but I know only one of those things will come true- that's why I'm on this website :)"

Uh-huh.