Subject: It's a nasty one, all right.
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Posted on: 2008-07-28 15:56:00 UTC
OA was ranting at me (I did volunteer to be ranted at, just so you know) for a loooooong time. However, we are discussing redeeming the five-year-old sister, who to be fair doesn't seem as bad. She's ben forced into a bit of Sueishness, but it's only to make the main Sue look better.
...That Cass kept trying to make me stop reading for a while and take a few deep breaths.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4222253/3/Guardian_Princess
Guardian Princess » by Artemis615
Kamui meets a stunningly beautiful lady who was feared among those who have encountered her. As he gets closer to her unconciously, her past and her fear is slowly starting to resurface once again. KamuixOC. Don't read if you hate OC. Pardon for being rud
First of all: This? Not a Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle fanfic. It only vaguely resembles to Acid!Tokyo world and the cast is made up of X/1999 characters. Who, other than Fuuma, Kamui and Kakyou, the author apparently doesn't know the names of.
Second: The girl does not seem to understand the term "post-apocalyptic landscape". Her clothing is ridiculous and her sister has a pink coat for some reason.
Third: The DLI is Kamui. That alone makes me want to kill her and he's not even my LO.
Fourth: The girl bitches out Fuuma for no reason and makes him run away from her. She also might have beaten up Yuzuriha, she didn't give the poor girl a name or description. It might have been Arashi or Karen but that's just as bad.
Fifth: She claims to be Touya's sister. Yeah, that's right, Kinomoto Touya. I'm not joking. Her sister is also named Freya, though she bares no resemblance so far to the Chobit.
I'm claiming it. Kurmori and Georgia will kill, possibly by stoning.
OA was ranting at me (I did volunteer to be ranted at, just so you know) for a loooooong time. However, we are discussing redeeming the five-year-old sister, who to be fair doesn't seem as bad. She's ben forced into a bit of Sueishness, but it's only to make the main Sue look better.