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Subject: Looking for Feedback
Author: Loyal Lady Pisces
Posted on: 2014-08-11 21:18:00 UTC

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10531716/1/Roar-Demon-and-Gentle-Dove

This is a fan fiction I am writing and would like some quality feedback I on it, I will warn that as this does flow with the canon of the Buddy Fight anime there will be spoilers from the show so I recommend watching the anime first if you like.

Oh but where are my manners? I am Lady Pisces an old hand writer who desires to polish my skills to be the best they can, I have read the PPC wiki and think I am going to like this place. I hope to hear more from you wonderful people.

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Looking for Feedback by Loyal Lady Pisces on 2014-08-11 21:18:00 UTC

*waves* by Ailavyn Siniyash on 2014-08-12 02:24:00 UTC Reply

Hello and welcome!

I give to you now a lined Infinite Notebook, complete with urple covers and wilver binding. Don't look at it straight on!

-Aila
Hello, and welcome aBoard! by Iximaz on 2014-08-11 22:29:00 UTC Reply

Have a hissing gerbil. He's much friendlier than he looks, I promise. ;)

Thanks! by Loyal Lady Pisces on 2014-08-12 00:03:00 UTC Reply

Oh I love him, I'll add him to my zoo of many pets!

Welcome! by Desdendelle on 2014-08-11 22:05:00 UTC Reply

-Points to the Constitution and the Original Series-
-Offers tea, scones and jam-
Don't let the leaves eat you.
Also... I must say, I've never heard of this animé... what's it about?

Re: Welcome! by zdimensia on 2014-08-11 22:32:00 UTC Reply

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EUydhSal94k Hmm, looks kinda like Monster Rancher / Digimon / YuGio .

Have a pair of Joo Janta 200 Super-Chromatic Peril Sensitive Sunglasses. Designed to help the wearer develop a relaxed attitude to danger, the lenses turn completely black at the first hint of trouble, thus preventing the wearer from seeing anything that might alarm him/her.

And whaddya know? A mini for the newbie. by son_of_heaven176 on 2014-08-12 01:28:00 UTC Reply

*picks up mini-Duel Monster YuGio*

This one looks like a Kuriboh! How cute!

^^ by Loyal Lady Pisces on 2014-08-12 05:37:00 UTC Reply

What do minis do?

Re: ^^ by Desdendelle on 2014-08-12 07:09:00 UTC Reply

Minis are the small creatures that spawn whenever someone misspells a name - "Every name misspelled in Rings, a mini-Balrog gets his wings".