Subject: Re: Concrit Required
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Posted on: 2014-08-03 14:37:00 UTC
Have you thought about using italics when she's interrupting herself? Other than that, it's looking pretty good.
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Concrit Required by
on 2014-08-03 09:18:00 UTC
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For my new story... thing... I'm working on. It's a Doctor Who one, but knowledge of canon isn't strictly necessary. It's kinda difficult to explain, so I'll just link to the public version here.
On a separate subject, but still DW related, check out this thing I found out about and wrote on my blog. It's almost scary.
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Best Easter egg ever! (nm) by
on 2014-08-04 16:30:00 UTC
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Re: Concrit Required by
on 2014-08-03 14:37:00 UTC
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Have you thought about using italics when she's interrupting herself? Other than that, it's looking pretty good.