Subject: Ch-ch-ch-ch-ch-changes!
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Posted on: 2014-07-06 06:15:00 UTC

-I approve of CC3 (though it still doesn't establish what people think either of them do...)

-Disguises 2 looks good, though it does specify 'kill the Sue', which... well, we've had arguments before about the PPC being More Than Just Killing Stuff. In the same manner as referring to 'PPC community members' rather than 'Boarders', you might want to tweak that. 'Kill any OCs present' might work, or simply 'kill the badfic'. I'd avoid 'spork' because it can be taken to indicate the entire MST section.

... and nothing else flagged up as needing changing. So that's good?

h--

OH BUT WAIT.

I see you have hidden questions. Back to look.

-SEP 3: Seems pretty comprehensive.
-SEP 4&5 are just repeats with different subjects, so no complaints there. In this case Sue is the only relevant word in SEP5, and furthermore doesn't require your agents to actually take on Mary-Sues, so no objection there.
-SEP 6: option 3 is 'the Force'! Yeah, this seems comprehensive.
-With this in mind, I assume CC4 is the box for listing the differences if you think there are any. That could probably do with clarifying.

h--

dear sweet lady Nessa, there's more?

-Departmental exceptions: you might want to at least list Intelligence, since they spend a lot of time in badfics. The rest of Inf we can probably leave unstated. Agent Kaitlyn is pleased to see the DCPS getting a mention. :)

-Multiple answers: fairly simple, no problems.

Is... is that it? Did I finish?

hS for reals this time

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