Subject: Re: Here is a link to my story
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Posted on: 2014-06-19 19:31:00 UTC
It's summer, which means less bored students hanging out on FF.net to kill time. I had the same anxiety a few years back.
I just read the first chapter, other than needing a beta, it's pretty good.
When Tiger gets a headache, a groan would correct Sparky's burst of omniscience that prompts him to ask what's wrong.