Subject: My Mary-Sue to be Sporked.
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Posted on: 2014-05-09 16:50:00 UTC
A normal girl gets sucked into a video game to spend time with her favorite character.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2409048/1/Selfishness-Ico
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2967844/1/POP-the-sequel-to-Selfishness
I have some useful notes that should fix any lack of familiarity with the game. Both stories should read like a walkthrough.
Raziel's OOC level should be pretty tolerable, as in they shouldn't read 100% in-character unless the writer owns them. I'm not sure if I made him too much of a jerk, not jerky enough, too patient, etc.