Subject: Another theory.
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Posted on: 2014-05-09 09:22:00 UTC

Having read all of the Hunger Games trilogy, and the first two Divergent books, I have a different idea.

A lot of the time, the scope of a series will start off small. In Divergent, we're mostly concerned with a single factor; even in Insurgent, we're looking at one city (and practically ignoring the existence of the outside world). Similarly, in The Hunger Games and Catching Fire, the scope is mostly limited to 'teenager fights in arena'. Yes, there are hints of more, but they're just that - hints, things taking place which our protagonist doesn't take (much) part in.

And then, for the finale, the scope widens explosively. That definitely happens in Mockingjay, and the conclusion of Insurgent suggests Allegiant will go the same way. Which means... well, partly that the fans are getting a distinctly different book to the last two, but partly also that the author is working outside their comfort zone. To pick another (non-trilogy) example: J.K. Rowling spent six books writing about a school, then wrote the last book as an epic quest. There were complaints about that on this very Board.

I think to a large extent this is local to young-adult fiction - or at least fiction starring young adults. They quite deliberately start with a 'teenagers think [small thing] is the most important thing EVER' approach, and build up to 'then the world ends and they're involved'. The 74th Hunger Games, the Dauntless initiation, finding the Philosopher's Stone - those were all pretty much business as usual for Panem, Chicago, and Hogwarts (respectively). But the finales? Those were world-changing events - or, in the case of Allegiant, seem set to be.

And a lot of the time, the author can't cope. I've not read Deathly Hallows, but a fair number of people here disliked it for just that reason. Mockingjay is my least favourite of the Hunger Games series - though I do still enjoy it. (I actually really disliked the Divergent Trilogy, but that's another story).

So what's the solution? Simple: make the shift before the last book. I'll use another YA series - Percy Jackson.

In Lightning Thief, we're fairly small-scale. Three teenagers go on a road trip across America. Yes, the stakes are high, but the scope is small. In Sea of Monsters, we have two sets of teens, plus a villain who's actively out to get them. Titan's Curse expands the group, and introduces literal world-changing with the raising of Othrys, and also threatens the gods directly. Battle of the Labyrinth starts off as a quest, but turns into... well, a battle.

So by the time of Last Olympian, we're already primed for a big, all-out fight. If the first four books had just consisted of 'go on a quest, find the thing, try to thwart the villains along the way', Last Olympian would have been as big a shift as Mockingjay was. And yes, that goes for both the readers - we wouldn't have been ready for the change - and the author. If you've written two or four fundamentally-similar books, writing a completely different last one is hard.

Another example: Lord of the Rings (of course). Fellowship has a very small scope - them, not to the world. In Two Towers, though, we see the build-up - Aragorn starts out as a Ranger chasing orcs, but finishes the book leading a battle. That primes us for the big battles of Return of the King. If the Hornburg hadn't happened, or had happened off-screen - if Aragorn had travelled to Edoras, then ridden straight to Isengard - the battles in the final volume would have come pretty much out of nowhere.

Too many words, nowt left to say; stopping now.

hS

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