Subject: I love everything about this idea.
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Posted on: 2014-04-26 05:24:00 UTC

Not the least because I just recruited two ten-year-olds from my last mission. Hee hee hee. I am going to have so much fun . . .

Seriously, you've made so much plot potential in this one little short; it's a huge addition to the PPC universe and to the community. Thanks so much, both of you, for the idea.

Good seeing some of your characters' children actually doing something on the page, instead of just existing, too. I did see one typo:

" . . . and it seemed to the children that a flickering spark they hadn’t even notice fled from his eyes."

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