I have one lined up who knows the novels, and therefore the character I've got (more than two hundred years older) as the Old Man. However, she never finished Riven, so I would like a second beta who can help make sure I've got other stuff correct.

The gist, for those who weren't here when I asked for a beta last or don't remember, is that by 2033 the whole Earth is in tension between opposite (and militant) sociopolitical extremes, and the story is mostly from the perspective of a refugee fleeing to Releeshahn.