I could use some help too

Looking for betas by Desdendelle on 2014-03-15 03:01:00 UTC Reply

Since I've finished my latest mission, it needs beta'ing. Knowledge of the continuum (Forgotten Realms) is nice but not strictly necessary; I mainly need the SPaG and general flow checked.

I could use some help too by Dark Brother 16 on 2014-03-22 07:00:00 UTC Reply

As the title thing says, I could also use some opinions on my fanfiction stuff. These will be the basis on which I do my own series, Imaginations Collide, which I have mentioned on here before. I have five (though one of them is my first Imaginations Collide episode, which I posted before I learned that the sort of thing wasn’t allowed), so here is the link to my profile. https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4238396/Dark-Brother-16

Constructive criticism is begged for, and if you read my Star Wars the Clone Wars - Irad's Adventures story, please give as much as possible. Especially on that one. They are all being rewritten. That's why I need the help.
Feel free to hit me up for that. (nm) by JulyFlame on 2014-03-15 04:39:00 UTC Reply

*whack JulyFlame* by Storme Hawk on 2014-03-15 16:06:00 UTC Reply

One hit delivered.

In other news, I don't have a great knowledge of the continuum, but I'm willing to have a look. I believe you already have my email, if not it's thestormehawk[at]gmail.com.

Derp. by Desdendelle on 2014-03-15 21:56:00 UTC Reply

By which I mean, GDerp shared.
*parries, and hits back. With a sledgehammer.* by JulyFlame on 2014-03-15 18:21:00 UTC Reply

My stick has a hard heavy end, and you oughtn't mess with a pro, even one who's declared retirement.

Much appreciated. Shared. (nm) by Desdendelle on 2014-03-15 14:45:00 UTC Reply

Looks like the second time you asked for a beta. by son_of_heaven176 on 2014-03-15 04:31:00 UTC Reply

I don't know the continuum at all, but I can help with the SPaG. Either send me the link to the GDoc (if you have one) or e-mail me at sonofheaven176[at]gmail.com

This is indeed the case. by Desdendelle on 2014-03-15 14:45:00 UTC Reply

However, the last thread is kinda really low on the main page, and did not get much attention.
That said, GDerp shared.