Subject: Another comic-strip fic
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Posted on: 2014-03-20 10:10:00 UTC

Another comic-strip fic from ToonDoo:

http://www.toondoo.com/ViewBook.toon?bookid=299953

This one's a Pokémon fic. Unfortunately, I don't know enough about Pokémon to know how badly it damages the continuum, but it's still a pretty bad fic by any standards.

Special highlights include pages 12 and 13, where all the dialogue suddenly repeats for no reason; pages 48-54 inclusive, where everyone slowly takes turns to jump across a chasm one at a time, Terry Nation-style; and pages 93 onwards, where a couple of characters are revealed to have Sue-style Deus-ex-Machina powers.

(Oh, grammar pedants should note the opening disclaimer says, "I do not not not not own Pokemon!!!!!!!!!!!" A quadruple negative technically means she does own it.)

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