when you helped me with typing a description of Volt Luster, as well as with making the description flow more with the narrative? I've now sent Outhra that spot in my story where the description is, and just as I promised, I'm giving you the same opportunity to take a look at that chapter. Would you like to take a look at it? You've mentioned your e-mail address in another thread, so I can e-mail it to you if you'd like.