Subject: Considering the fic's about an otherwise-ordinary musical,
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Posted on: 2014-01-27 19:54:00 UTC
I'd say that a witch turning someone into a small dog in that universe makes this a pretty high-caliber badfic as it stands. In fact, it's situations like those that prompted the founding of the Department of Improbabilities. I don't know the movie that this fic is about, so I can't pick out any out-of-character charges in the short two chapters, but the dog has apparent romantic plans for this presumably-canon human, which is incredibly gross. Also, it has human-shaped eyes coated with fur, and apparently turns into the form of a naked man at random, which are both just confusing. The problem with missioning this, though, is that it's quite short and, aside from the massive genre break where a witch turns a man into a dog, nothing much actually happens. We've had missions on short fics before, but usually something ridiculous happens to the characters or numerous words are humorously misspelled and the results can be made fun of or something. Missioning this fic could be done, since there are some pretty big charges here, but it would be difficult to thoroughly mock something this uneventful.