That was an interesting little story. I like how you start it out with Killroy seeming to be just as horrified as the reader, but then showing more and more that Killroy himself is no stranger to murder and dead bodies, forcing the reader to grow away from him as the comic unfolds. Adding the wife character later and showing her lack of surprise adds to the unsettling feeling I got looking at these characters' lives from outside.

I also like how the story is both in prose and traditional comic form. It gives it a bit of a storybook feel, which contrasts sharply with the subject matter.

Wow.
That was brilliant. It really was. I liked your style, and I was interested in it the whole time.
Keep up the great work!

I like the mood you set up, and the pairing of the panels and narration. It's all very interesting.

-Aila

Compelling, and pretty well done. Thanks for sharing :)

~DF

I've read up to 15/16 and am already intruiged. I love your style. I've never seen it before.

Great job!
I'll finish reading later.