These were recommended for PPCing, and written, by the guy who asked me to report My Little Dashie.

Fic A: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7788288/

Fic B: http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/browse.php?type=authors&uid=995

Fic C: http://ponyfictionarchive.net/browse.php?type=authors&uid=995


Fic C isn't that bad. Basically, it involves Princess Celestia ruminating about her actions during the battle against the Changelings (I'm only up to the Cider Squeezer 6000 episode, so my knowledge of those events is secondhand). Yes, the grammar could be better. Yes, it has a standoff scene with some weird double entendres. But I like the idea, and I don't think it's PPCable, mostly because it's very short and Celestia is surprisingly in character (or more accurately, we see another side to her that it seems reasonable for her to have).

Fic B... is a rapefic. It's tagged with "everything imaginable" which I guess would be better than NOT being tagged, but... there's an OC who sounds exactly like Kam (the author) if Kam were to spontaneously lose 50 IQ points, Rarity and Prince Blueblood have their characters partially inverted, and the actual "plot" involves Rarity being gang-raped... and enjoying it... while Sweetie Belle is herself raped... and also enjoys it. Seriously, it's just... Kam told me he wrote it to being traffic to his account thinking people would read it as porn, but how anyone would find this arousing I don't know.

Fic A starts out reasonably well, but continually decreases in quality as it goes on. It creates an extracanonical race of ancient ponies called "Builders," who may or may not be Suvian enough to merit extermination (they were set up as superior to all the other ponies, but actually had to deal with some of the consequences of their hubris); the villain is... hammy; the Mane 6 become flat and one-dimensional (although this is actually justified somewhat by the Elements of Harmony apparently sucking away their personalities); overall the story piles on new plot points without resolving the old ones, but in spite of all of this it raises some interesting points that I'd like to see expanded on.

Then I read the last three paragraphs, which consist of the Stu from Fic B drugging, and predictably preparing to rape, Twilight freaking Sparkle.