Subject: Received!
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Posted on: 2013-10-02 03:10:00 UTC
I've opened it and, well, your first sentence looks good...
You know how it is. I'll hopefully get you some feedback within the next few days :)
~DF
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Looking for a beta! by
on 2013-09-30 20:32:00 UTC
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Now that my mission is finally done, I need a beta to see just how inconsistent my writing is...
Kidding. But I do need a beta. Knowledge of the continuum (Forgotten Realms) isn't required, but I need someone who can spot plotholes and inconsistencies well. I also need someone to check for SPaG mistakes.
If anyone's interested, post your email so I'll be able to share the GDoc with you. -
Also on the lookout. by
on 2013-10-01 22:53:00 UTC
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I'm looking for a beta just to read through the latest draft of my Permission writing sample. I've got most of it sorted out but a fresh air of eyes would be appreciated.
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Send it over. by
on 2013-10-02 02:17:00 UTC
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Or share it, whichever. My email's below.
My apologies to everyone if I don't get back to you right away, occasionally university interferes (pesky thing!) But such interference tends to be temporary, so...send away!
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I'll have a look. by
on 2013-10-01 00:24:00 UTC
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I believe you've got my email account if not send it to either stormehawk@gmail.com or thestormehawk@gmail.com, I check both.
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Send it over! by
on 2013-09-30 23:25:00 UTC
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That is, share away!
dawnfire360@gmail.com
Wow, it's really weird not to be posting as DuskWater.
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Shared (nm) (nm) by
on 2013-10-01 11:53:00 UTC
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Ooh, NM&NMs! Thanks! (nm) by
on 2013-10-01 16:41:00 UTC
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Be careful your alternate personality doesn't take over. by
on 2013-10-01 04:24:00 UTC
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Too much time in an altered mindset can do weird things to a person. I see from your later chapters in the fanficWorld thread that you're already on speaking terms with your DuskWater self; that's good. It keeps the other mindset from becoming hostile, and allows it to differentiate itself as a separate entity. You don't want it claiming to be the "real" you, or you're going to have a real problem, no pun intended.
All pseudo-psychology aside, that sort of thing is why I didn't make Cyber-Observer much different from myself, albeit a version myself from several years ago before I learned that not everything I thought up was a good idea. It feels weird shifting out of something you didn't realize you became accustomed to.
Maybe I'll diverge a little further next year; this year's Cyber-Observer was more an experiment than anything else, and it failed in certain respects.