Subject: There appears to have been a transcription error.
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Posted on: 2013-09-19 02:09:00 UTC
After Volt flees from the Paras, the phrase "relieved to hear the buzzing noises fading giant bees came out from every tree on this planet" appears. I distinctly remember that phrase being separated parts of two sentences when I was beta-reading earlier.
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After Volt flees from the Paras, the phrase "relieved to hear the buzzing noises fading giant bees came out from every tree on this planet" appears. I distinctly remember that phrase being separated parts of two sentences when I was beta-reading earlier.
You remember correctly, it is supposed to be two sentences. It should be fixed now.