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OK, let me explain what I mean. As the head of the All Purpose My Little Pony division (with a grand total of zero missions...currently) and hardcore brony, I feel properly qualified to say that this is not badfic.

For the amount of canon it breaks: Not much. So the main character is practically the definition of angst. So Rainbow Dash is dragged into the human world with the rest of the six in tow a mere 16 years later. So what if this is blatant wish fulfillment. The character of Rainbow Dash is, relatively, kept in character. In fact, the dad makes a point to make sure she has all the skills she had from the show, as well as the personality. She has one or two moments that are questionable for Rainbow, though not wholly improbable. Add in that the main character seems to experience some growth through this story, and while is whinier than most people I know, he seems a relatively innocent character. Stu he aint. This story just does not commit enough crimes against canon to warrant a mission. Sorry.

From what I can see the only real problem would have to be the borderline Angsty stu human who's life outlook changes when he raises a surrgoate daughter figure. But then agian this is common in canon meida if you don't belive me watch "Man on fire" or play "The Last of Us." I say borderline because while he did teach Rainbow to be Rainbow he didn't do the excpted stu thing and go on a roaring rampage and beat up the other mane 5 and Celstia. A heartwarming story and a possible agent material for a FiM divsion if there is one