I quite liked this! Both agents are very enjoyable, with Trollenfisch being particularly notable. Their reactions to the piece were most understandable. The dramatic turn at the end, however, felt out of place. Maybe I need to go back and more closely read their other mission (which I most definitely will do now).

I will say that the actual mission part of this (as short as it was) fell prey to the issue of sounding more like a MST than an actual mission. Their responses were almost all dialogue. It would have been nice to see some actual physicality beyond the little that was shown.

There's also a sizable PPC continuity error in this piece. Admiral Pansy has been previously written with an exaggerated accent (as seen here and here), which is completely missing in this appearance. This was also stated on his wiki page, which is why it always pays to check those first before writing up one of the PPC shared characters.

So yes! Very nice! Hope to see more with these two in the future.

Who would even think of doing that? That's cruel... Oh look there's no N on the N key on my keyboard anymore. Huh.

Poor Gabrielle. Who would be so mean to such a cute little Pokémon? I'm glad she has Doktor Trollenfisch to help her out. I'm also impressed with your ability to use a mission to a ridiculous trollfic to invoke such strong emotions.