I enjoyed it and both the agents seem to have got into the swing of things nicely.

Also Narnia reference get!

The first movie's great! Dunno about the sequels, though; I heard Dead Man's Chest was neat if a bit much.

Yay, Rina points out all the history fails that would've bothered me, too! History nerds unite! :D *fistbumps*

Couple little things:
"...flinching at the sound of cannonfire in the distance."
Cannon fire.

"'I’ll bet you ten Poké.'"
Hilarious, but keep in mind that Poké is equivalent to the yen, meaning ten Poké barely amounts to anything. Two hundred Poké might be closer to five bucks, depending on the current yen/dollar exchange rate.
...I'm such a nerd. :P

"'Ho-oh's feathers, it's hot out here.'"
*wrangles Ho-oh the mini-Missingno* (It's properly spelled Ho-Oh, btw. Capitalization is important.)

The ending feels kind of abrupt. No closure for what's-her-face the secondary Sue? No neuralyzation scene?

...But that's just me. Great work otherwise, and here's hoping Rina starts recovering her sanity.

Pirates of the Caribbean is one of those continua that everyone has to go into at least once. What really struck me about this one was the casual mixing of modern and old-time mores, actions, and speech. It's as though the writer hadn't a clue that back then women didn't become pirates (well, usually), nor did gentlemen address young ladies by their first names, nor did young ladies call on each other in their bedrooms rather than their parlors.

If you are going to write a period piece, doesn't it behoove you to actually read about the time period in question?

Ah... fanbrats.

Nice job, dear. Entertaining as always.

Although, I was hoping for Rina going "Drink up, me hearties, yo-ho~!"