Subject: He can move in with OrangeYpshi99.
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Posted on: 2015-05-25 03:47:00 UTC
And OtangeYoshi99. And there's problably an OrangeyOshi99 too, :/
Subject: He can move in with OrangeYpshi99.
Author:
Posted on: 2015-05-25 03:47:00 UTC
And OtangeYoshi99. And there's problably an OrangeyOshi99 too, :/
So I've finally completed my Permission request, and am ready to submit it.
Activity: I recognize your name and you've been around a while, so you're good there. Gold star.
PPC Knowledge: Seems solid. I noticed your mention of Bleepettes; for some reason that stuck out to me. You're good on this count.
Fic to Spork: I almost missed the link, but I did spot it and dear Whedon what is that thing? Kill it and give it to the Reavers. (Don't listen to me, do what you will with it.)
Characters: I must say, I especially approve of Natasha's Firefly fandom Look pretty good. Natasha seems to have a lot of potential set up by her backstory, and Aaron by his... new-ness? It'll leave him open for a lot of character growth. You're good to go here. ;)
Writing Ability (Creative): Very good. I especially loved the CAD reading in the random prompt- *rubs neck* -bit of a Mood Whiplash at the end, but I think you pulled it off. (I laughed at the line about potato jokes in the control prompt, even though I don't get the reference, so that's a good sign.)
Writing Ability (Technical): I did notice one typo ("A thin line of Glitterly blood oozed from the wound.") but other than that, you're golden.
It is therefore my pleasure to say Permission Granted! Happy sporking!
Yay for AoT-inspired agents! *high-fives* *gives potato* I look forward to your first mission!
Well, you and your betas. ;) Good luck with your first mission; I can't wait to see these two in action!
This is why I wish my laptop had light-up keys.
And OtangeYoshi99. And there's problably an OrangeyOshi99 too, :/