Subject: Nice work!
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Posted on: 2015-05-18 16:27:00 UTC
I'm a little concerned, though: don't most Touhou characters look like they're about twelve years old? Not sure how I feel about a young(-looking) character in a relationship with the obviously-adult Gabby.
Cute story otherwise, though :)
RC 512 Interlude 2: Orientation Day
In which I talk a little more about Gabby and Chakkik, and introduce a new character!
Hopefully, I've given Gabby a bit more of a personality, with having someone else for her to bounce off of. Also, a slight bit of Chakkik exploration.
I think it's nice that you gave Chakkik a little more character. I can't wait to see how he develops!
I'm a little concerned, though: don't most Touhou characters look like they're about twelve years old? Not sure how I feel about a young(-looking) character in a relationship with the obviously-adult Gabby.
Cute story otherwise, though :)
Adéle's 23, so she's actually older than Gabby.
She's young for a youkai, though. She does have a unique creativity-encouraging youkai power (the power to build things), but she's only figured out a few applications of it.
As long as both parties are consenting adults, I don't think there is a major issue with how old the character looks. I tend to draw the line when there is a physical age difference and not just a perceivable one (if that makes sense?).