Subject: I'm a derp.
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Posted on: 2015-05-01 17:09:00 UTC
harry heath ninety-nine at that service where the mail is hot. =]
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Looking for Permission Beta by
on 2015-05-01 14:42:00 UTC
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Like the title says - I'm looking for someone willing to beta my Permission request.
Canons involved are Fate/Stay Night, Attack on Titan, and Fallout (specifically, Fallout 3). However, I wouldn't mind having someone who's not familiar with the canons take a look at it, to make sure that everything's clear enough. And of course, to point out any fixes needed to spelling/grammar/overall writing clarity.
If you're interested in taking a look, reply and let me know your gmail account, if you have one, so I can share it with you. -
I think I've got enough people (nm) by
on 2015-05-01 19:12:00 UTC
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I can help! by
on 2015-05-01 18:58:00 UTC
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I've read quite a bit about AoT, so, well, you called for a canon expert? c: (Well, for one of the continua involved, anyway! ^^;)
My address is my Boarder name (at) gmail (dot) com. -
Thanks! (nm) by
on 2015-05-01 19:13:00 UTC
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If you want another set of eyes as well... by
on 2015-05-01 18:56:00 UTC
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I'll be happy to take a look as well. You can reach me at
evilaiuberoverlord at the Google -
Thanks! (nm) by
on 2015-05-01 19:11:00 UTC
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Put me in, coach! =] by
on 2015-05-01 15:41:00 UTC
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I don't know the first thing about any of the canons, but I'm pretty good about story flow and sentence structure, and I'm an occasional
bottle-dodgerstand-up comic so I know how jokes work. I'd be only too happy to take a look!
--Scapegrace, who somehow got Permission at the first time of asking. =] -
What's your email? (nm) by
on 2015-05-01 16:33:00 UTC
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I'm a derp. by
on 2015-05-01 17:09:00 UTC
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harry heath ninety-nine at that service where the mail is hot. =]
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Thanks! (nm) by
on 2015-05-01 17:47:00 UTC
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Okay, so. by
on 2015-05-01 18:47:00 UTC
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I've left a few comments, but mostly? I think you can be proud of what you've got. The conceit for the story you've got is inventive and has a lot of potential, and your writing style tells me you can deliver on the promise. Weird gun trivia and politics aside, your characters are decent people who I think could do well, and I look forward to seeing your mission completed!
This is also one of the few times I've been interested in anything regarding Attack On Why Is Everything Brown?, so kudos for that too. =]