Subject: Punctuation nitpick
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Posted on: 2013-01-29 22:05:00 UTC
Haven't read the full chapter yet, but I've been meaning to bring this up:
I've noticed that you have a habit of using hyphens where they're not needed, such as in "Horde- and Alliance decorations." That's actually wrong; you don't need a hyphen after "Horde," because "Alliance decorations" is neither a hyphenated nor a closed compound; it's just an adjective and a noun. You only hyphenate like that if you're dealing with multiple cases of compound adjectives with the same ending element, like so:
choral- and instrumental-music programs
five- to ten-minute intervals
Or when dealing with prefixes with a shared suffix:
over- and underfed cats.
Does that make sense? I'm never sure if I'm explaining these rules very well.
~Neshomeh, off to actually read the thing now.