Subject: The heck?
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Posted on: 2013-01-27 08:37:00 UTC
I don't even know this fandom and I can already spot the mistakes. I had to re-read some parts because of the grammar! And the lyrics felt...awkwardly placed. Very awkwardly placed.
Hey, it is a bit early for a newbie to post, but I was wondering if I should do a mission on this post. It's a Short Supernatural Sabriel Slashfic (aliteration) that manages to take both the Winchesters horribly OOC. I don't really know what Sabriel shippers are thinking, because Sam and Gabriel canonically despise each other and I am preeetty sure that they are both straight. Anyways, link is here:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8922208/1/Broken-hearts
P.S. I am not requesting permission, I just wanna know what you guys think.
I don't even know this fandom and I can already spot the mistakes. I had to re-read some parts because of the grammar! And the lyrics felt...awkwardly placed. Very awkwardly placed.
What have you done to Dean? What have you done to Sam?! Good grief, the only IC part of this fic was Dean and Sam caring about each other! I mean, I like Sabriel as well as the next person, but this pretty much just stomped on everyone's characterization, Dean's most painfully (imo). Kill it, please (once you have permission, of course).
~DF
I'm a pretty heavy Sabriel 'shipper myself, but this... Hnggh. Where do I even begin...
Yeah, this hurt to read. On the bright side, this is about one of the worst ones out there. And I am going to have a lot of fun exorcising slash demons and killing replacement Sam with my best friend :)
Just to avoid any further confusion.
...I get really confused and automatically think of the Garth Nix novel by the same name.)
I dunno about Sabriel being a bad ship- I, personally, think it has a neat dynamic, and since when has canonical loathing stopped shippers?- but oh man, poor Sam. That is as OOC as OOC can be. Dean less so, but definitely still slipping into OOC territory.
Whenever you get permission, I say forge on ahead with it. Stake a claim on the "claimed badfic" page on the wiki.
At first I thought it was referring to a Supernatural / Abhorsen crossover slashfic.
Ok, a Supernatural/Abhorsen crossover slashfic would be worse than simply horrible.
But it would seem that such a fic does not exist. For now, at least.