Subject: Asking for ConCrit. Again.
Author: darklordaakmal
Posted on: 2013-01-20 16:00:00 UTC

Alright. I guess that not many boarders here have watched Total Drama. That's OK, there is still a lot I can get complaints on, my grammar, my plot, my continuity, anything else. So, here I am again to present my next fic.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8926261/1/Blood

This fic, Blood, is about Justin's bloodlust and backstory. It's just the first chapter. Any comments on my writing skill will be used to improve it, so comments are very much in need.And don't hold back, poke any holes you can.

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