Subject: Nice work.
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Posted on: 2014-12-02 04:58:00 UTC

Just from your sporking, it's clear that this badfic deserved all zero reviews that it got on FFN.

I pray that it never gets a single one.

About the mission itself, though:

First of all, what happened to the bit characters? It seems that the Sue created quite a few. (Destiny, Sirius JR/Sirius Jr) Don't those usually get disposed of as well?

Secondly, a rare double error.
“What, you’re not gonna charge for the Pluralpostophe?” Randa asked.
First of all, a spelling error: you forgot an R; I believe your portmanteau was meant to be spelled "pluralpostrophe."
Second, the technical term for an apostrophe being used before a pluralizing S is "greengrocer's apostrophe." I don't know if you didn't know that before or were just trying to be funny, but as they say,



Either way, good mission, and hopefully someone comes up with some solution for poor Rina before she starts going flamethrower-crazy!

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