Subject: My thoughts.
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Posted on: 2014-09-07 00:40:00 UTC

What is it that makes these guys not the PPC? You've said that they're going to 'follow much of the same rules', and may share* tech, and even living space. If all that is true, then why aren't they just Agents of the PPC?

The main procedural difference is that these guys will go into published works - something that the PPC has rules against. So what makes your 'Operators' significantly different from rule-breaking Agents? The other difference that you've noted is a bunch of name changes... well, if it looks like a duck an Agent, quacks like a duck an Agent(?) and acts like a duck an Agent, then whatever you call it, I'm going to see it as a duck an Agent.

Thinking specifically of the Eliminators and FVUs, etc. it seems unlikely to me that an independent organisation would break its operations groups up using the exact same structure as the PPC, just with different names. Personally, I think you should try and make Asterion more different from the PPC.

There's no reason that you can't have your own organisation that's associated with the PPC, after all, there are plenty of others already - various OFUs have had direct links, and I believe Ispace used to be on friendly terms with the PPC. I've got an organisation of my own that I'm planning on throwing into the mix, I just haven't got around to actually writing anything about it yet. The point is, all of these other affiliates have a different niche that they operate in.

In-universe, I'd think that the PPC would welcome allies (assuming that they're still perpetually understaffed), particularly if operate in a similar manner and have shared goals. It'd make the alliance a lot smoother than if they've got wildly opposing goals.
Out-of-universe, I think you'd have to make the organisation significantly different from the PPC, otherwise it's going to look uncomfortably close to plagiarism / an attempt to circumvent the Permission process.


*when you say that they may share technology, does that mean that Asterion has some unique tech of its own to offer? The CAD alternatives don't seem like they would offer any major advantage to an Agent. I'm just wondering what sort of tech sharing you were imagining.

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