I liked the in-character explanation of what the PPC does. I'll probably read this again.

It is not impossible that sonofheaven176 goes by "sonofheaven176" on Google, but I’m quite sure that "Elieen" is wrong. Don’t feel too bad about this, you are not alone. I once caught "Hieonymus" in a fic I had beta’ed, hopefully before anybody else could see him. (Crediting the beta readers only after they did their job is a bad idea, because then the credits aren’t beta-read.)

Since I don’t trust the mini-boarders, and don’t know the sylvari’s language (or sylavari language?), I have to ask whether "sylavari" is the adjective form of "sylvari".

Also there is an unnecessary repetition:
She befriended me and told me of her plans to unite the the Three Orders of Tyria into One.

Besides these problems, this may be my favorite newbie-is-introduced-to-the-PPC story. Ava’s confusion and loneliness, and Salvo’s explanations are very well done, indeed, and their interaction is just great.

HG

So, wait, she cried? Tears? Liquid and all?
There's something odd about a plant crying. Even a plant person.
It'd be even more bizarre if the creeper cried, of course, so I suppose there's a strangeness bullet dodged there.

I'm sure she'll do fine in HQ. The place is used to sapient plant-types.

Wherein some poor creeper witnessses some poor guy give some other poor guy a... well, you do NOT wanna know what he gives him, let's leave it at that.