Re: Getting better.

Testing a character's personality. by Bramandin on 2016-03-14 19:15:00 UTC Reply

I was starting to think Kelly was an INTJ, which is usually villain material. Turns out that she's an ISTJ, which is a bit better, but still aloof.

Has anyone else typed their characters? How well do they conform to profiling?

Looking for more concrit on this... by Bramandin on 2016-03-14 19:41:00 UTC Reply

I re-wrote the story about Kelly in the sorting room.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QF0FlEAo-KlcoaVcPfgg1V0wgfEM6xe_UhM3iPkm7Ak/edit?usp=sharing

I tried to soften her a little bit, but decided that she would still have similar reactions. Is she still too much of a villain to work?

Getting better. by Anonymous on 2016-03-15 07:50:00 UTC Reply

It's improving, in my opinion(even though I'm just a lowly noob). I think Kelly might be a character I would want to read about. You spelled "propaganda" "propoganda" in the title, though.

Re: Getting better. by Bramandin on 2016-03-25 15:15:00 UTC Reply

Thanks, I'll try to remember to fix the title on my way out.
Gahh, that was me there. (nm) by Irrelevant on 2016-03-15 07:50:00 UTC Reply

NT: Having trouble finding badfic by Bramandin on 2016-03-14 19:25:00 UTC Reply

I'm testing Kelly against situations by actually doing mock-missions, but I'm having trouble finding a good one.

I want to write Kelly as trained and somewhat experienced, but her partner is going to be freshly-recruited.

I tried "it's not a blender, it's a coffeemaker," but I didn't like it because the charges came too fast with no redeeming paragraphs.

I tried "https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5120113/1/The-Lost-Girl" but other than NSFW squick, there isn't much bad writing to worry about. Fem!Harry could reasonably turn out more like Bella Swan, I think.

I do want to do https://www.fanfiction.net/s/243350/1/Remembering-Jada but not with a raw recruit. So not for the first mission.