Subject: Not familiar with Skyrim...
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Posted on: 2016-02-07 13:04:00 UTC

Try not providing translations to the readers. If it doesn't work, you can change it.

If it's just a smattering of words that the reader can figure out their meaning, it's fine to just include them.

If he's talking to someone who will reply, see if the dialog works as a one-sided telephone conversation.

I'm not sure if this is correct writing, but I have seen fanfiction where a character says the non-english stuff and the translation directly follows.

Be careful with footnotes, they are annoying when they get too far away from the text that they are referring to.

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