Subject: Thanks, and a clarification
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Posted on: 2016-02-05 18:23:00 UTC

What would really be helpful is everything but the canon details. Basically I'd like someone to check if the idea is even salvageable first. It's in a very rough state.

And then if it workable, maybe spend a few minutes marking where I need more description, and point out awkward transitions.

I understand if you still don't want to deal with that canon.

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