Subject: Re: How does one write "agents visiting home" stories?
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Posted on: 2016-02-04 13:47:00 UTC

There is another story where Applejack (I think?) almost froze to death on an agent's mother's porch.

There might be a sequel to a story where a guy was allergic to gingerbread.


My advice, which may not be correct relative to the PPC:

Why are they going home?

Is this the first time they have visited since joining the PPC?

How have they changed from before they joined and who they are now?

If this isn't the first time they have visited, have they been through something that has changed them?

You don't need to include these answers in the story, but knowing their motivation generally helps.

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