Subject: Thank you!
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Posted on: 2016-01-13 11:58:00 UTC

It's an incredibly striking image; I can't wait to use it.

Ooh, yes, trial by ordeal. I'd heard about that before, particularly the method where the accused picks up a red-hot iron bar and carries it a certain distance. If his hands don't get infected (good luck with that, Englishmen in the days before basic hygiene) then he's innocent. If they do, well, there's your answer. History was brutal.

I'm not sure if this is what you meant, exactly, but that gives me the idea of my main character (Susan, at the moment, but this story has only just begun so it could change) accidentally signing up to be infected. It would be kind of like selling yourself into indentured servitude to help your family, but, you know, without the whole "living" bit. She might actually get infected, forcing her companions to break into one of the most dangerous courts in the world to get the antidote. Which would be pretty fun to write.

Also, ingenue-- excellent word for Susan. And just an excellent word.

-Alleb

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