I was probably a little emotional when I posted this thread. Yep, being misconstrued by someone I was trying to help really get on my nerves, but like what you had said, taking criticisms need experience and passion.

That Bleepfic series, according to my observations, had never received any negative feedbacks before until someone who was as traumatized as me posted a hyperbolic comment, and my critiques was actually written down under the author’s reply to her. That could possibly explain why the author had such a bad reaction to negative feedbacks——she was indeed inexperienced in receiving criticisms.

I tried to be as polite as possible in the critiques, but maybe I am still too blatant when pointing out mistakes instead of trying to talk about them in a more subtle manner. Making people accept criticisms is also a skill, and I definitely need to practice on it. Thank you for telling me that.

I would like to give you a link to the series, but unfortunately, my critiques and conversations with the author had all been hidden by her, so you will not be able to see it. I kept one of the draft for the critiques on my computer, but due to the fact that I am still in China, I cannot actually posted it onto a google document and share it with you. Sorry about that.

Here is the series(Warning: NSFW/NSFB) http://bloodyfangs75.deviantart.com/gallery/48340614/SCP-shipping

P.s. Yep, a whole series of smut might be not so horrifying in some other continuum, but this is SCP Foundation Universe we are talking about. If you know about the nature and canon of this continuum, it will be no surprise that this SCP Shipping series is indeed a collection of Bleepfics.

My critiques is on the second one of the Journal series, and if you are not sure, just look at the comment sections of each fiction. A whole jumble of “hidden by owner” comments are quite easy to spot.

I had actually met badfic writers who cared about their stories, and after meeting very harsh and blatant critics, they accepted them humbly.

Some of them had really listen and did everything to change their writings, and after a few years, they become writing stars in the community.

That is the reason why I got a nasty surprise trying on different type of writers. Guess too much success and positive experiences in the past does not help.

*Facepalm*

A very serious continuum in general, and though this series of smut, Scriptfics and crack pairings may not be as horrifying and obnoxious in other continuum, it had definitely caused severe damage to the SCP Foundation canon due to its complete disregard of canon laws.

Thus, it qualified as a Bleepfic series in this situation. Not to mention OOCness, large amount of squicks and Bad Biology.......

Here is the series(Warning: NSFW/NSFB)

http://bloodyfangs75.deviantart.com/gallery/48340614/SCP-shipping

You will not be able to see the criticisms I made, though. They were hidden by the author.

Not all attempts at giving concrit are doomed to fail. I was successful(ish) once.

As I was looking through the Bakugan section of FFN, I ran across this series of fics. At first, the OC was believable, and what was then portrayed as the main conflict (the OC's sister mysteriously disappeared some time ago) was quite intriguing. But as the series went on, the OC became more and more Sueish, up to the point where the Sue became a "secret member" of the Battle Brawlers (the protagonists) and was actually a behind-the-scenes catalyst for canon events. That, on top of a clearly Sueish power, made me stop reading and offer some concrit. You know what? She actually took it to heart--but was about to resolve it the wrong way: "I sometimes forget to point out her flaws and her overall rebellious attitude which can get in the way sometimes. ... I will try to de-sue her some more."

Fortunately, I responded quickly and got someone else to help clarify what made her OC a Sue.

I say "successful(ish)" because I don't know if she's gotten around to fixing them yet (though at least there are no further entries in the series), but I'm sharing this to say that success is possible. There are authors willing to listen.

There was one Warriors fic I found that summarized the first two chapters in a run-on sentence and was an Agnst!fic for sure, all in the summary. And then it had to say at the end, "I suck at summaries!" Seriously, I'm sick of that sentence. If we can't trust the author with a summary, why should we trust them with the story?

Fortunately, the story had only three very short chapters so far. So I PMed and told the author what I said about the summary-suck thing, said it was not a good idea at all to have the summary all in caps, and not to have it sound like you are begging for the audience to pity the MC. Thankfully, he said he could see some sense in all of that. Then I told him that to best fix the problems, he would have to delete his story and start over, but that I would help him in any way I could as a beta on Fanfiction.net as he rewrote.

His response: "Ooookaaaaay...?"

And there has been no reply from him ever since. Such a shame. :(

Sorry, guess I was speaking from assumptions just now.

Usually when a fiction's breach of canon laws is severe to a point that you could not find any trace from the original work apart from the names, the critiques one can give is probably limited to something along the line "Would you kindly read/watch the work you are supposed to be a fan of, right from the start?"

Yes. No matter how bad a fanfiction is, as long as the author is willing to take advice, everything is fine.

However, badfic authors rarely react well to critiques. The worse the quality of the fiction, the less likely the chances that they WILL actually listen to a critic.

Well, not always, but still highly possible in most cases.