Subject: It's not that bad
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Posted on: 2015-10-20 21:33:00 UTC
I'm currently in between working periods - just waiting for some feedback before I make the final changes. It really won't be a problem - and I'm always happy to help.
I think I need a few more beta readers for my Permission docs. I mostly need people to check for SPaG, though someone who could help me to refine my agents would also very much appreciated.
On that note, EPL and Skarmory, would you guys still be willing and able to help me?
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Aren't you currently in the process of prepping for your own Permission request though? Wouldn't it be a little too much work for you to take care of your own docs and mine at the same time?
I'm currently in between working periods - just waiting for some feedback before I make the final changes. It really won't be a problem - and I'm always happy to help.
If that's the case, I would be glad to accept your help. I will send you the links later tonight.
For classified reasons, though, my personal computer is on lockdown until 5 PM daily, so I don't know if I can get to the files concerned until after that time. Regardless, please send me the link and I can look over it again as soon as I can!
Just one thing though. Would you advice me to start from scratch for the prompts this time around? Otherwise, it is still the same docs you already have acess to.
I'm already trying to clean up most of the issues Iximaz pointed. And I could really use some help with fleshing out Aiko's personality since she also pointed that hers is a bit shallow at the moment, so at very least, I would ask to take you to another look at the agents doc.
I'm willing to throw my stick in the pile. I like reading other peoples stories.
If you are a native speaker, or really, if you just better at SPaG, than me, I guess you could of help on that front.
The only issue is that, well, these are my Permission docs. I don't know if you have read about that before, but basically, these are things that I am writing to be then submitted for approval so that I am allowed to write my own PPC spin-off.
There is nothing to indicate that someone who hasn't got Permission themselves yet or even a newbie couldn't be of help there, but I feel that someone who has already gone throught the process would be able to offer more insight into what is required to suceed.
However, if you are still willing to help, shoot me your e-mail and I might consider it. If nothing else, I really need help with English with these stories, it seems.
I can definitely help you with SPaG.
Also looking at someone else's submission would give me a better idea of how the Permission process.
Plus I really like reading character profiles.
I clearly need help with SPaG. Plus one of my agents' home continuum is HP so maybe you could also help with that.
Just provide me with your e-mail and you will send you the links.
Is there a way I can PM you? I don't like having to post my email online.
My e-mail should available up there in my username. Send me an e-mail telling me it's you and I will send the links.