Aren't you currently in the process of prepping for your own Permission request though? Wouldn't it be a little too much work for you to take care of your own docs and mine at the same time?

Just one thing though. Would you advice me to start from scratch for the prompts this time around? Otherwise, it is still the same docs you already have acess to.

I'm already trying to clean up most of the issues Iximaz pointed. And I could really use some help with fleshing out Aiko's personality since she also pointed that hers is a bit shallow at the moment, so at very least, I would ask to take you to another look at the agents doc.

If you are a native speaker, or really, if you just better at SPaG, than me, I guess you could of help on that front.

The only issue is that, well, these are my Permission docs. I don't know if you have read about that before, but basically, these are things that I am writing to be then submitted for approval so that I am allowed to write my own PPC spin-off.

There is nothing to indicate that someone who hasn't got Permission themselves yet or even a newbie couldn't be of help there, but I feel that someone who has already gone throught the process would be able to offer more insight into what is required to suceed.

However, if you are still willing to help, shoot me your e-mail and I might consider it. If nothing else, I really need help with English with these stories, it seems.